FEEDBACK
Positive
- ‘Stamped’ name has a
strong link.
- GIF is super strong.
- Like the receipt idea
with the stamp concept.
- Receipt idea has a
good sense of humour, but has been done before and the link to the exhibition
is a little weak.
- Strong colour palette.
- Good GIF - use peoples
work as the images.
- GIF has a strong idea
behind it, links to print (Stamped).
Negative
- Receipt and GIF share no visual language.
- Receipts are not
stamped they are printed.
- Typeface for ‘stamped’
is too sporty.
- No relevance of
receipt.
- Still quite basic and
needs a lot more work.
Suggestions
- Softer typeface.
- Apply a tighter
kerning.
- STAMPD.
- STAMPT.
- ’S’ on its own,
doesn't need a shadow.
- Use different photos
to spell stamped for the logo.
- Create the logo as
Stamp.
- Focus on the media
used of the GIF, apply the idea behind the GIF to the whole work, using peoples
work for the background of each letter.
Comments
- Looks like an american
varsity logo.
- Looks american variety
style.
- Stamped needs to be
tied into the works, doesn't say ‘art exhibition’.
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